Overall, very good. But watch your levels all the time. There are some times when the bass and drums are too loud in the mix and they start to distort. this takes away from your final product no matter how well written it is. I thought the introduction could use some work. The use of delay on the vocal samples is classic, but it could have used more than a sustained pad sound behind it if the intro is going to be that long. If you really want to keep it that simple, then shorten the intro. I loved the grove that came in about 1/4 the way through, and I liked all of the variations to the groove that you incorporated. I especially liked the fad out at the end. Good job.
I live in Pittsfield, Ma. I am a senior in high school and I love music. I play percussion in the school band but I also play piano, guitar and I sing. As of right now, I am teaching myself violin, tin whistle and bodhran (an irish drum). I take voice lessons at the Berkshire Music School and I used to take piano lessons, but I stopped...I do too much else. I love to hang out with my friends, especially Danny and Michelle. They are the twins that all my friends here so much about... They are adorable.
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Overall, very good. But watch your levels all the time. There are some times when the bass and drums are too loud in the mix and they start to distort. this takes away from your final product no matter how well written it is.
I thought the introduction could use some work. The use of delay on the vocal samples is classic, but it could have used more than a sustained pad sound behind it if the intro is going to be that long. If you really want to keep it that simple, then shorten the intro. I loved the grove that came in about 1/4 the way through, and I liked all of the variations to the groove that you incorporated. I especially liked the fad out at the end. Good job.
I really like this. Where did you get the voice from? It sounds very pretty and mystical/
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